i ponder past thoughts of us
exploring
taking
receiving
they do nothing for me now
toes don't curl
breath staccato not
empty
empty
empty
are your words now and even then
though i declined to listen
those sweet nothings were
just that indeed
stupid
love
lust
good for me i thought
bad to me you were
erotic spoke and i obeyed
sense of common i ignored
freedom
from
you
1 comments:
Short, thoughtful and sweet!! I liked how you used 'empty' three times to indicate that each one has a different meaning and the content really made me think about growing apart from someone and choosing to ignore your inner thoughts or feelings you have towards them.
Donusho.
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